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GENTLe MAN 25-08-2007 12:16 PM

:: خلك قدها وإدخل صححهـآ :: مُتعهـ وإستفـآده ::
 
السَلام عَليكُم

::

[ LaD!eS / GeNTLe MeN ] .. !

It !s A Game

In Th!s Game I wanna Every one Try 2 Be A Corrector

::

نرجع للحظه للعربيه [ BREAK ] .. خخ

اللعبه سهله أرجو من الجميع التفـآعل [ منها نستفيد

ومنها نستمتع ] ..!

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فقط انا رآح أقوم بوضع :: جمله إنجليزيه فيها خطء مُتعمد ::

وإلي يجي بعدي يورينا شطارته ويحاول يكتشف الخطء

ويصلح الجمله وبعدها هو بدوره يضع جمله للي بعده يوجد بها أغلاط ..!

أو ممكن يعمل تمويه [ ويخلي جمله صحيحه

والذكي الي بعده يجي ويقول أنه الجمله ما فيها أغلاط ] ..!

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أتمنى إنها وضحت

وانا راح أبتدي بشيء بسيط إن شاء الله

( I Like She But She Don't Like Me ) يلا إكتشف الأغلاط 2

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نظرعيني 25-08-2007 12:39 PM

اقتباس:

I Like She But She Don't Like Me

I like her but she dosent like me



He is good man but him sister are bad

GENTLe MAN 25-08-2007 01:09 PM

That'S Correct

اقتباس:

He is good man but him sister are bad


( He Is a Good Man But His Sister Is Bad ) .. !

][3][ Mistakes ][

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][ She walk under the sun every day ][

نظرعيني 25-08-2007 10:50 PM

Correct

اقتباس:

She walk under the sun every day

.She walks under the sun every day

نظرعيني 25-08-2007 10:55 PM

sami is adoctor .he have black hair

4
Mistakes

GENTLe MAN 26-08-2007 12:50 AM

Correct


اقتباس:

sami is adoctor .he have black hair

.sami is a doctor , he has black hair




][ Would you mind drink some tea ][

( Mistakes 2 )

حوراء الحصن 26-08-2007 09:16 AM

][ Would you mind drink some tea


correct


جملتي هي:Has your course started already?

1mistake

GENTLe MAN 27-08-2007 01:13 AM

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة حوراء الظاهرة (المشاركة 196147)
][ Would you mind drink some tea


correct



!..[ sorry .. [ It is not correct

The correct answer is

( ?..Would you mind drinking some tea )


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GENTLe MAN 27-08-2007 01:24 AM

اقتباس:

Has your course started already?

1mistake


I thinK the answer is

( ? .. Has your course already started )

..

mine sentence

][ ?.. Could you tell me when is the next bus leave ][

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حوراء الحصن 28-08-2007 11:05 AM

( ? .. Has your course already started )

The correct sentence:

Has your course started yet?

no already

:)



?.. Could you tell me when the bus next leave

correct?:)

حوراء الحصن 28-08-2007 11:49 AM

جملتي هي:he has been at his computer since six hours

1mistake

GENTLe MAN 28-08-2007 01:21 PM

اقتباس:

( ? .. Has your course already started )

The correct sentence:

Has your course started yet?

no already

:)
Yeah .. uR The teaCheR


اقتباس:

?.. Could you tell me when the bus next leave

correct?:)
:: Well .. It Is

?.. Could you tell me when the next bus leaves



اقتباس:

he has been at his computer since six hours
. he has been at his computer for six hours

I hope that's Correct

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GENTLe MAN 28-08-2007 01:30 PM

mine sentence

][ . Maybe, i'm going to see the doctor after 2 hours ][


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حوراء الحصن 28-08-2007 01:37 PM

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة GENTLe MAN (المشاركة 196764)


Yeah .. uR The teaCheR




:: Well .. It Is

?.. Could you tell me when the next bus leaves





. he has been at his computer for six hours

I hope that's Correct

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yes my brother correct:thumbup1:

حوراء الحصن 28-08-2007 01:41 PM

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة GENTLe MAN (المشاركة 196766)
mine sentence

][ . Maybe, i'm going to see the doctor after 2 hours ][


..
.


Maybe, i'm going to see a doctor after 2 hours ][

it is correct?


my sentence:


What are you do?
1mistake

نظرعيني 29-08-2007 03:07 PM

اقتباس:

What are you do

what did you do?


I still rememmber the day when I met her

GENTLe MAN 30-08-2007 02:59 AM

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة حوراء الظاهرة (المشاركة 196770)
Maybe, i'm going to see a doctor after 2 hours

it is correct?


my sentence:


What are you do?
1mistake

Not correct

It Is :: Maybe, i'll go to see a doctor after 2 hours

(that because i'm not sure if i'll go or not "Maybe)

(i'm going means i'm sure that i'll go)

i hope that was easy to understand


اقتباس:

What are you do?
? What are you doing

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GENTLe MAN 30-08-2007 03:12 AM

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة نظرعيني (المشاركة 197117)


what did you do?


I still rememmber the day when I met her

Spelling mistake

I still remember the day when I met her

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I only have 5 minutes before it starts , i should'nt late

أبو خليل 23-10-2007 11:01 AM

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة GENTLe MAN (المشاركة 197271)
I only have 5 minutes before it starts , i should'nt late

Iam not that much good in grammer but i will try

I have only 5 minutes before it strat, i souldn't late

.My sentence is : Yesterday I visit my grandfather. he was very happy

two mistake please

حوراء الحصن 23-10-2007 11:11 AM

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة أبو خليل (المشاركة 207789)
Iam not that much good in grammer but i will try

I have only 5 minutes before it strat, i souldn't late

.My sentence is : Yesterday I visit my grandfather. he was very happy

two mistake please

تصحيح الجمله:

My sentence is : Yesterday I visited my grandfather. he was very happy

correct my brother?:)



?my sentence:Is he play football

one mistake only

أبو خليل 23-10-2007 11:20 AM

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة حوراء الظاهرة (المشاركة 207791)

تصحيح الجمله:

My sentence is : Yesterday I visited my grandfather. he was very happy

correct my brother?:)



?my sentence:Is he play football

one mistake only

true but u forget the capital letter in the start the second sentence he sould be He

your sentence i think

Is he paly a football?

my sentence is : How age are you ?

one mistake only

فواكة 23-10-2007 11:45 PM

How age are you

How old are you?

My sentence is : she is in that setting rom
two mistake


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